If I ask him to refrain from something, he is finding ways to justify doing it. If I ask him to do something, he is feigning as if there are more important work than this. He is becoming adamant and cunning. I coudnt handle him. Oops, I forgot to introduce him. He is, my mind.
This is a 55 fiction.



26 comments:
Really good one Bharati.Good to be first one to comment! Am I the first one?
Really good! Wonderful and apt depiction!
@ Pra: Thanks. yeah, you are the first one. Thanks again.
@ Guria: Thanks buddy. I am happy that you liked it.
Nice one, Bharathi!
It is not 55 Fiction , It is a 55 Fact ;)
Hi
m new to the blog..liked this really!
and abt post..good creation..bt how do u get it to be 'He'? :)
your mind is very smart...:P
Smart one.....unexpected.!
quite pragmatic and creative ... :)
Very nice post man..short and smart!! I liked this..keep blogging..
@ Sumit: thanks pal.
@ LR: may be, as everyone's mind tends to be as notorious as mine :-)
@ Vishal: Welcome to this blog. cant you watch your mind silently? so he is 'he' :-). keep visiting.
@ Sid: :D yeah. keeps on annoying me. Thanks for commenting.
@ Mahesh: Thanks pal. am glad you liked it.
@ Sandy: Thanks, thanks, thanks. I am very happy that you liked it.
Bharathi,
Nice one brother.
Mind is often out of control.......lols
@IP: thanks buddy.
@ 日不落: 我更喜欢享受地球
Poised one!
Keep it up.
@ Makk: Thanks pal.
nice thing done by ur ingenious mind !!!
@ Akd: haha thanks
Good attempt.
@ Shas: thanks pal.
I don wanna say its nice coz all of them already know its quite wonderful. Being inspired by ur fictions I tried something n scribbled in ma blog... Do visit n leave some comments...
Nice one.....
@ kamal: OK. will do.
@ Vijay: thanks buddy.
smart and innovative
@ Mahesh: thanks buddy.
sir.. gethu kalapiteenga.. nice buildup.. it seems tht u too have refrained from blogging for a while.. hi-fi..
@ vISHNU: YEah. too tough life. no free mind to wite a post. too many things running in my head.
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