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If I ask him to refrain from something, he is finding ways to justify doing it. If I ask him to do something, he is feigning as if there are more important work than this. He is becoming adamant and cunning. I coudnt handle him. Oops, I forgot to introduce him. He is, my mind.

This is a 55 fiction.

26 comments:

pra said...
January 10, 2010 at 10:04 AM

Really good one Bharati.Good to be first one to comment! Am I the first one?

Guria said...
January 10, 2010 at 10:35 AM

Really good! Wonderful and apt depiction!

Bharathi said...
January 10, 2010 at 11:38 AM

@ Pra: Thanks. yeah, you are the first one. Thanks again.

@ Guria: Thanks buddy. I am happy that you liked it.

Sumit said...
January 10, 2010 at 12:23 PM

Nice one, Bharathi!

Lakshmi Rajan said...
January 10, 2010 at 12:26 PM

It is not 55 Fiction , It is a 55 Fact ;)

vishal jindal said...
January 10, 2010 at 8:52 PM

Hi
m new to the blog..liked this really!
and abt post..good creation..bt how do u get it to be 'He'? :)

SiD said...
January 10, 2010 at 8:54 PM

your mind is very smart...:P

Mahesh Kalaal said...
January 10, 2010 at 11:25 PM

Smart one.....unexpected.!
quite pragmatic and creative ... :)

Sandy said...
January 10, 2010 at 11:30 PM

Very nice post man..short and smart!! I liked this..keep blogging..

Bharathi said...
January 11, 2010 at 9:33 AM

@ Sumit: thanks pal.

@ LR: may be, as everyone's mind tends to be as notorious as mine :-)

@ Vishal: Welcome to this blog. cant you watch your mind silently? so he is 'he' :-). keep visiting.

@ Sid: :D yeah. keeps on annoying me. Thanks for commenting.

@ Mahesh: Thanks pal. am glad you liked it.

@ Sandy: Thanks, thanks, thanks. I am very happy that you liked it.

Indian Pundit said...
January 13, 2010 at 3:45 AM

Bharathi,

Nice one brother.

Mind is often out of control.......lols

Bharathi said...
January 13, 2010 at 4:50 PM

@IP: thanks buddy.

Bharathi said...
January 15, 2010 at 11:40 AM

@ 日不落: 我更喜欢享受地球

Makk said...
January 20, 2010 at 5:08 PM

Poised one!


Keep it up.

Bharathi said...
January 20, 2010 at 6:55 PM

@ Makk: Thanks pal.

akd said...
January 20, 2010 at 10:20 PM

nice thing done by ur ingenious mind !!!

Bharathi said...
January 20, 2010 at 11:26 PM

@ Akd: haha thanks

Shas said...
January 23, 2010 at 12:47 PM

Good attempt.

Bharathi said...
January 23, 2010 at 1:09 PM

@ Shas: thanks pal.

Kamal said...
January 29, 2010 at 1:37 PM

I don wanna say its nice coz all of them already know its quite wonderful. Being inspired by ur fictions I tried something n scribbled in ma blog... Do visit n leave some comments...

√ij@y said...
February 1, 2010 at 8:05 AM

Nice one.....

Bharathi said...
February 1, 2010 at 12:05 PM

@ kamal: OK. will do.

@ Vijay: thanks buddy.

Mahesh Kalaal said...
February 23, 2010 at 3:28 AM

smart and innovative

Bharathi said...
February 24, 2010 at 1:25 PM

@ Mahesh: thanks buddy.

Vishnu said...
April 5, 2010 at 4:11 PM

sir.. gethu kalapiteenga.. nice buildup.. it seems tht u too have refrained from blogging for a while.. hi-fi..

Bharathi said...
April 10, 2010 at 10:22 AM

@ vISHNU: YEah. too tough life. no free mind to wite a post. too many things running in my head.

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